Second draft of my music magazine front cover

Here is another magazine front cover which i have designed, this is more what i wanted my magazine to look like in terms of the colour and imaging, and layout etc. However i looked more closely aty this and looked at hard the writing was to read and then decided to change this even further to m,ake sure that it reaches my target group and would be something that i am proud of producing. Here shown below is the second draft if my music magazine.